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Consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in europe

Consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in europe mLGN1

The given diagram depicts the buying of fish and few varieties of meat ina European country in the time period of 25 years i. e 1979 to 2004. The units are measured in grams per person per week. It is worth noting that, the consumption of chicken is higest in 2004. On the other hand, the expenditure on fish is least in 1979 and 2004. In more detail, the people in Europe are used to eat 220 grams of beef approximately in 1979. However, it decreased in 2004 i. e 120 grams per person per week approximately. Moreover, the amount of lamb taken by the residents is fluctuating between 70 to 150 respectively. In addition, the utilization of chicken is 140 grams in 1979 and reached to first place in 2004. Nevertheless, the use of quatic food is high in 1979, when compared to 2004. Hence, people in Europe nation mostly prefer to chicken.

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