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The table below gives information about mobile phone owners in the UK between 2006 and 2010

The table below gives information about mobile phone owners in the UK between 2006 and 2010 XV0QA
The table compares the percentages of mobile phone owners who used 7 different types of features in the UK in the years of 2006, 2008 and 2010. It is clear that the highest percentage of user used mobile phone to make calls. However, the less popular feature was video recording for the users throughout the period. In 2006, making calls was the most popular feature at 100%. While playing games and playing music were used by only above 10% users. There were no data for searching the internet and recording video, whereas taking photos and send and receive text messages were at 66% and 73% respectively. For the remaining features users, top three mobile phone functions saw some changes in terms of their users between the years of 2008 and 2010. There was a dramatic increase in the percentage of users who used mobile to surf the internet from 41% to 73% in 2008 and 2010, a rise of 32% users over two years. The percentages of users who used mobile to play games, music and record video experienced some changes from 42% to 41%, 18% to 26% and 9% to 35% respectively for the same years.
The table compares the
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types of features in the UK in the years of 2006, 2008 and 2010.

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that the highest
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mobile phone to
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calls.
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, the less popular
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was video recording for the
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throughout the period.

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at 100%. While playing games and playing music were
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above 10%
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. There were no data for searching the internet and recording video, whereas taking photos and
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and receive text messages were at 66% and 73%
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For the remaining features
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, top three mobile phone functions
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in terms of their
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between the years of 2008 and 2010. There was a dramatic increase in the
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who
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mobile to surf the internet from 41% to 73% in 2008 and 2010, a rise of 32%
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over two years. The
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mobile to play games, music and record video experienced
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from 42% to 41%, 18% to 26% and 9% to 35%
respectively
for the same years.
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