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Data of divorce and marriage as well as martial status

Data of divorce and marriage as well as martial status DNKga

The provided set of graphs illustrates the number of weddings and separation as well as marital condition of Americans adults for the time period of 30 years beginning from 1970. A glance at the data suggests that total number of marriages has decreased over the years. While, the same remained unchanged until 1980. After that, there was minor decline of half million for next twenty years and the final number stood at 2 million in 2000. Also, number of divorces was half then number of weddings in 2000. In 1970 one million cases of divorces were recorded which increased to nearly 14 lacs in 1980. The number of separations was slight more than 10 lacs in 1990. The other graph shows that 70 percent of total adults in America was married in 1970 which decreased to 60% in 2000. Additionally, there was negligible number of divorced adults in 1970 but in 2000 almost one out of 10 adult was divorced. In 1970 approximately 16% adults were those who never married and it expanded to 20% in 2000. Interestingly, widowed adults counted for less then 10% for both the years. Overall, there was no significant change in number of marriages and divorces. The share of married adults was dropped. Consequently, proportion of divorced adults was raised.

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number
 of marriages and divorces. The share of married You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpersonwomanman
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