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Look at the two maps of Sunnyhi/ls University campus in 1995 and today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Look at the two maps of Sunnyhi/ls University campus in 1995 and today. DNKdm
The diagrams illustrate the differences between the campus of Sunnyhills University in 1995 and today. As we can see, there are many changes in the quantities of buildings, new facilities and the location of each one. In the past, the were 2 car parks: one in the top left corner and the other was next to the café. But now there first car park location is the area of a bigger main reception, and the only car park locates next to it. Nowadays, there are two halls of residences in the left side instead of one in 1995. There are two building did not change their location: the Watson building and the founder’s building, but they come with a bigger appearance. The Scott library locates at the café’s area in 1995 and its location in the past is the new arts building and the labs at the right hand. The old sport complex is now replaced with the recreation area with trees and a pond. Nowadays, the bus stop is moved to the top right corner, next to the student’s union and opposite to the new table tennis tables.
The diagrams illustrate the differences between the campus of
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Sunnyhills
University in 1995 and
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today
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see
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changes
in the quantities of
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buildings
, new facilities and the
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location
of each one.

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left
corner and the other was
next
to the café.
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But
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now
there
first
car park
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location
is the area of a bigger main reception, and the
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only
car park locates
next
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left
side
instead
of one in 1995. There are two
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building
did not
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change
their
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location
: the Watson
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building
and the founder’s
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building
,
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they
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come
with a bigger appearance. The Scott library locates at the café’s area in 1995 and its
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location
in the past is the new arts
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building
and the labs at the right hand. The
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old
sport complex is
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now
replaced with the recreation area with trees and a pond. Nowadays, the bus
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stop
is
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moved
to the top right corner,
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to the student’s union and opposite to the new table tennis tables.

IELTS academic Look at the two maps of Sunnyhi/ls University campus in 1995 and today.

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6.0
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