Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

the table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000

The provided table compares datum about various modes of travel with average distance in miles that travelled per person in particular country between 1985 and 2000. Overall, the largest average distance in miles belongs to travelling by car and the least number of people prefer to travelling by taxi and bicycle. Looking at detail, in 1985 Travelling by bicycle, local bus and walking on foot are 10, 155 and 18 miles are higher than the numbers be observed in 2000 respectively. Despite of this, the most preferable transportation system is lower about 1607 miles than the amount be seen in 2000 and other transportation types are also lower than that of 2000. People who travelled by long distance bus increased from 54 miles to 124 miles. The average miles travelled by train and other modes also rose around 77 and 135 miles accordingly. British did not use taxi quite often back in 1985 - only 13 miles per year was travelled by every citizen which made the taxi the least common mode of transportation this year. However, this number increased to 42 miles per person in 2000. If we look at the total amount of average miles that travelled per English citizen went up from 4740 to 6475 miles in 15 years
The provided table compares datum about various modes of travel with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
average
distance in miles that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
travelled
per person
in particular
country between 1985 and 2000.

Overall
, the largest
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
average
distance in miles belongs to travelling by car and the least number of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
prefer to travelling by taxi and bicycle.

Looking at detail, in 1985 Travelling by bicycle, local bus and walking on foot are 10, 155 and 18 miles are higher than the numbers
be observed
in 2000
respectively
. Despite of this, the most preferable transportation system is lower about 1607 miles than the amount be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
in 2000 and other transportation types are
also
lower than that of 2000.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
People
who
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
travelled
by long distance bus increased from 54 miles to 124 miles. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
average
miles
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
travelled
by train and other modes
also
rose around 77 and 135 miles
accordingly
. British did not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
taxi quite
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
often
back in 1985 -
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
13 miles per year was
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
travelled
by every citizen which made the taxi the least common mode of transportation this year.
However
, this number increased to 42 miles per person in 2000. If we look at the total amount of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
average
miles that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
travelled
per English citizen went up from 4740 to 6475 miles in 15 years

IELTS academic the table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
211 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • the table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000