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The diagram shows how heat is lost and energy wasted in a house because of air getting into and out of the house.

The diagram shows how air getting into and out can affect a house. To make a house lose its heat and waste its energy, air leaks into the house through the dryer vent, the kitchen fan vent, windows, doors and a lot more. The second way is to make air leak out of the house. There go through other ways, the mainly get out of the house through high places like the attic's hatch, or the bathroom fan vent located at the top. The diagram shows that air leaking in usually comes from the bottom of the house and the air leaks out at the top.
The diagram
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getting into and out can affect a
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lose its heat and waste its energy,
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leaks into the
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house
through the dryer vent, the kitchen fan vent, windows, doors and a lot more.

The second way is to
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leak out of the
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. There go through other ways, the
mainly
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out of the
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through high places like the attic's hatch, or the bathroom fan vent located at the top.

The diagram
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shows
that
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leaking in
usually
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from the bottom of the
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and the
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leaks out at the top.

IELTS academic The diagram shows how heat is lost and energy wasted in a house because of air getting into and out of the house.

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4 paragraphs
106 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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