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An analysis of how air circulates in a house and how it causes energy wastage due to heat loss is illustrated in the illustration.

An analysis of how air circulates in a house and how it causes energy wastage due to heat loss is illustrated in the illustration. In general, it is clear that heat is lost from a room through several devices on a flat surface or ceiling. In any case, heat is transferred through some areas of the room. According to the diagram, the process of heat loss occurs because the air is always entering the house. Leaked air travels into the 1st floor of the building via a bent dryer, outdoor windows, and water tap. Additionally, on the second floor, air comes in through windows and doors, while bathroom power outlets and kitchen vents add more air in. Furthermore, the thermal air is released from the house through the ceiling. In kitchens and bathrooms, the air passes through recessed lights and ventilation fans. Next, it also leaked out through the attic in the living room.
An analysis of how
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air
circulates in a
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house
and how it causes energy wastage due to
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heat
loss
is illustrated
in the illustration.
In general
, it is
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clear
that
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heat
is lost
from a room
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through
several devices on a flat surface or ceiling. In any case,
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heat
is transferred
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through
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some
areas of the room.

According to the diagram, the process of
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heat
loss occurs
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because
the
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air
is always entering the
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house
. Leaked
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air
travels into the 1st floor of the building via a bent dryer, outdoor windows, and water tap.
Additionally
, on the second floor,
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air
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comes
in
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through
windows and doors, while bathroom power outlets and kitchen vents
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add
more
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air
in.

Furthermore
, the thermal
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air
is released
from the
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house
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through
the ceiling. In kitchens and bathrooms, the
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air
passes
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through
recessed lights and ventilation fans.
Next
, it
also
leaked out
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through
the attic in the living room.

IELTS academic An analysis of how air circulates in a house and how it causes energy wastage due to heat loss is illustrated in the illustration.

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154 words
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