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The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The Digram Below show the production stages of Carbonated drinks Overall, the process of making soft drinks takes 5 stages, which start from water cleaning and end on the packaging stage. Firstly production start fillteration of raw water which further process with water softener and other chemicals. Secondly it goes through the stage of Heating evaporation and carbonation in which it goes through the electric heaters then it pass through the cooling pipe and mixed with carbon dioxide. Moreover, when water became carbonated water after the mixing of carbon dioxide it pass through the pipe and goes in the mixing tank. Color, syrup and flavour has been mixed with the carbonated water in this stage. Nextly it pass to the second last stage Filtering and filling where botlle and cans has been filled. Finally all the filled bottle and cans goes to the packaging stage where it packed and shipped.
The Digram Below
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show
the production
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stages
of Carbonated drinks

Overall
, the process of making soft drinks takes 5
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stages
, which
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start
from
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water
cleaning and
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end
on the packaging stage.

Firstly
production
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start
fillteration of raw
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water
which
further
process with
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water
softener and other chemicals.
Secondly
it goes
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through
the
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stage
of Heating evaporation and carbonation in which it goes
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through
the electric heaters then it pass
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through
the cooling pipe and mixed with carbon dioxide.

Moreover
, when
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water
became carbonated
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water
after the mixing of carbon dioxide it pass
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through
the pipe and goes in the mixing tank. Color, syrup and flavour has
been mixed
with the carbonated
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water
in this
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stage
.
Nextly
it pass to the second last
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stage
Filtering and filling where botlle and cans has
been filled
.
Finally
all the filled bottle and cans goes to the packaging
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stage
where it packed and shipped.

IELTS academic The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks.

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