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The diagram shows how heat is lost and energy wasted in a house because of air getting into and out of the house.

The diagram shows how the air leaks in and out of the house, which causes /which results in losing of heat and wasting of energy. The air goes into the house mostly through first-floor windows and doors. It also goes in by the kitchen fan vent and the electrical outlet. All these vents are located at on the first and second floor. We can see that by using some technological applicants, we can make the air goes in our houses. And a lot of air moving out of the house from the roof of the building. It goes through the attic hatch and recessed lights, which leads to the roof space. In conclusion, the diagram shows how the air escapes and gets into the house. It creates a lot of heat loss and energy wastes.
The diagram
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shows
how the
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air
leaks in and out of the
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house
, which causes /which results in losing of heat and wasting of energy.

The
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air
goes into the
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house
mostly
through
first
-floor windows and doors. It
also
goes in by the kitchen fan vent and the electrical outlet. All these vents
are located
at on the
first
and second floor. We can
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see
that by using
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some
technological applicants, we can
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make
the
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air
goes in our
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houses
.

And
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a lot of
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air
moving out of the
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house
from the roof of the building. It goes through the attic hatch and recessed lights, which leads to the roof space.

In conclusion
, the diagram
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shows
how the
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air
escapes and
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gets
into the
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house
. It creates
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a lot of
heat loss and energy wastes.

IELTS academic The diagram shows how heat is lost and energy wasted in a house because of air getting into and out of the house.

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135 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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