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The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901. v.1

The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901. v. 1
The table graph represents the number of employees and establishments in England and wales between 1851 and 1901. Overall, the largest number of male and female were employed in the beginning of the period. However, number of factories were unstable compared to total employees. In 1851, there were only 225 factories with 477, 100 total employees after a decade, number of total employees dropped sharply to 291, 780 while number of factories showed a slight increase to 227. In 1871, total number of employees and factories experienced dramatic changes, number of total employees dropped just over its half and number of factories rose to 622. After a decade, quantity of factories peaked at 721 and total employees declined slightly to 126, 132. In 1891, number of factories started collapsing too and at the end of the period factories went down to the 600 and only 61. 000 employees remained
The table graph represents the
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employees
and establishments in England and wales between 1851 and 1901.

Overall
, the largest
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number
of male and female
were employed
in the beginning of the period.
However
,
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number
of
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factories
were unstable compared to
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employees.

In 1851, there were
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only
225
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factories
with 477, 100
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total
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employees
after a decade,
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number
of
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total
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employees
dropped
sharply
to 291, 780 while
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number
of
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factories
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showed
a slight increase to 227. In 1871,
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total
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number
of
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and
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factories
experienced dramatic
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changes
,
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number
of
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total
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employees
dropped
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over its half and
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number
of
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factories
rose to 622. After a decade, quantity of
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factories
peaked at 721 and
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total
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employees
declined
slightly
to 126, 132. In 1891,
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number
of
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factories
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started
collapsing too and at the
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end
of the period
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factories
went down to the 600 and
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only
61. 000
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remained
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
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IELTS academic The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901. v. 1

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3 paragraphs
148 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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