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The graph shows the figure of road accidents which occurred in Someland between 1983-1995.

The graph shows the figure of road accidents which occurred in Someland between 1983-1995. YwLgj
The graph shows the figure of road accidents which occurred in Someland between 1983-1995. Overall, it is clearly visible from the number of road accidents decrease gradually over a period of 12 years from 1983. At the beginning of the time frame, 1983-1984 the figure of road accidents remained unchanged over 4 million of accidents previously going through a significant growth of 2. 6 million of accidents and reached the highest point of 6. 7 million of accidents in 1986. The number of road accidents fell noticeably from 6. 7 million to 3. 3 million in 1987 and fluctuated around 4 million to 2. 8 million in the years 1987 to 1992. 1992, In this period, the figure for road accidents hit a low of 2. 8 million of accidents in 1991. It could be clearly seen the huge difference from the highest to the lowest. The number of road accidents witnessed a sharp fall from 4. 0 million to 3. 0 million between 1992 and 1995.
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Someland
between 1983-1995.

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decrease
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over a period of 12 years from 1983.

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remained unchanged over 4
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previously going through a significant growth of 2. 6
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accidents
and reached the highest point of 6. 7
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in 1986. The number of
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fell
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to 3. 3
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in 1987 and fluctuated around 4
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to 2. 8
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million
in the years 1987 to 1992.

1992, In this period, the figure for
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hit a low of 2. 8
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of
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in 1991. It could be
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the huge difference from the highest to the lowest. The number of
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witnessed a sharp fall from 4. 0
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million
to 3. 0
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million
between 1992 and 1995.
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IELTS academic The graph shows the figure of road accidents which occurred in Someland between 1983-1995.

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