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The table and chart give the results of surveys in Australia about the use of the internet. The table provides information on the reasons for use. The chart shows use in relation age.

The table and chart give the results of surveys in Australia about the use of the internet. The table provides information on the reasons for use. The chart shows use in relation age. obPMw

The table and chart report the purpose and age of using internet. Overall, in spite of many various aims, banking, ordering products and services and billing take the most percentages in internet usage. Except from the age above 65, the other age groups get this same experience at a high-level approximately over 90%. As can be seen from the table, bills keep the largest proportion at 63%, only higher 1% than banking while the rate of products and services purchasing is 57%. In contrast, Phone calls and blogs nearly record a relative low interest at 22% and 10% respectively. Regarding to the bar chart, only people who are 65 plus get a low rate at 58% of internet use. Next is young children under 14 years old (89%). The rest age group gain the high percentage range in this issue over 90%, in particularly 100% for the group aged 14-17.

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 this same experience at a high-level approximately over 90%.

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 higher 1% than banking while the rate of products and services purchasing is 57%. In contrast
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