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The diagram shows the life cycle of the honey bee. Two things to consider are: how to summarise the diagram before describing the stages in detail whether to use active or passive verb forms Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows the life cycle of the honey bee. Two things to consider are: how to summarise the diagram before describing the stages in detail whether to use active or passive verb forms JVMoe
The life cycle of a honey bee if very important to the environment and human eeconemy, and each cycle lasts from 34 to 36 days. A honey bee's life cycle starts when the female bees lay their eggs, each bee can produce a maximum of 2 eggs every 3 days. The egs then hatch after 10 days. Following this, the newborn bee continues to mature and go unti the nymph stage. The nymph moults a total of 3 times throughout its maturing process, after each time it grows in size and. The first moulting begins 3 days after the egg hatches, then again after 7 days, and a final time after 9 more days. Now the bee has fully matured, the total process takes more than 30 days.
The life cycle of a honey bee if
very
important
to the environment and human
eeconemy
, and each cycle lasts from 34 to 36 days.

A honey bee's life cycle
starts
when the female bees lay their eggs, each bee can produce a maximum of 2 eggs every 3 days. The
egs
then hatch after 10 days. Following this, the newborn bee continues to mature and go
unti
the nymph stage.

The nymph
moults
a total of 3 times throughout its maturing process, after each time it grows in size and. The
first
moulting
begins
3 days after the egg hatches, then again after 7 days, and a final time after 9 more days.
Now
the bee has
fully
matured, the total process takes more than 30 days.
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IELTS academic The diagram shows the life cycle of the honey bee. Two things to consider are: how to summarise the diagram before describing the stages in detail whether to use active or passive verb forms

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