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The rendered two maps illustrate the information about the lakeside development since 2000 and 2009 .

The rendered two maps illustrate the information about the lakeside development since 2000 and 2009. YRPEN
The rendered two maps illustrate the information about the lakeside development since 2000 and 2009. In an overview, there were numerous facilities which provided in lakeside area but school and residential area remained same from 2000 to 2009. At the fleeting glance, in the north direction the derelic werehouse changed into car park in 2009. The residential area was unchanged between 2000 and 2009. The old town converted into offices and university which located in North South direction. Moreover, in West side, the art centre replaced with cinema. In 2009, the school was untouched which situated near the river. Furthermore, the lake rebuilt into pond and it's size became small. In the south west side the residential area was demolished and there constructed a shopping centre. The industrial complex was made large in size and residential area was totally removed from there.
The rendered two maps illustrate the information about the lakeside development since 2000 and 2009. In an overview, there were numerous facilities which provided in lakeside
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remained same from 2000 to 2009. At the fleeting glance, in the north direction the
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derelic
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werehouse
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into car park in 2009. The
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residential
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was unchanged
between 2000 and 2009. The
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town converted into offices and university which located in North South direction.
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, in West side, the art
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centre
replaced with cinema. In 2009, the school
was untouched
which situated near the river.
Furthermore
, the lake rebuilt into pond and it's size became
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small
. In the
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south west
side the
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residential
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area
was demolished
and there constructed a shopping
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centre
. The industrial complex
was made
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large in size
and
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residential
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was
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removed from there.
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IELTS academic The rendered two maps illustrate the information about the lakeside development since 2000 and 2009.

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142 words
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