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The given diagram shows manufacturing instant noodles by using eight steps.

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The given diagram shows manufacturing instant noodles by using eight steps. Here I will abridge the information and report the main features and compare where relevant. Look at the diagram; this process consists of the eight-step. First, this illustration provides the information a container truck provides flour to the storage soils. The second step starts taking flour from the storage soils to the mixer. Water and oil are also mixed with the flour in the mixing process. The rollers take the water and oil mixed flour to dough sheets. That fourth process is indicated in Dough converts to dough strips. Turn to the remaining data set. Fifth step dough strips make noodles discs. After this process, the noodles disk is cooked with oil, then dried for mixed vegetables and spices in the cups. Complete the seventh step; the noodles cups are ready to attach levels and seals for marketing. This is the end of the process of manufacturing instant noodles. The main gradients are flour mixed with water, oil, vegetables, spices, and cooking oil. All this process is completed by automatic machine.
The
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diagram
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shows
manufacturing instant
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noodles
by using eight
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steps
. Here I will abridge the information and report the main features and compare where relevant.

Look at the diagram; this
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process
consists of the eight-step.
First
, this illustration provides the information a container truck provides
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flour
to the storage soils. The second
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step
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starts
taking
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flour
from the storage soils to the mixer. Water and
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oil
are
also
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mixed
with the
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flour
in the mixing
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process
. The rollers take the water and
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oil
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mixed
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flour
to
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dough
sheets. That fourth
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process
is indicated
in
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Dough
converts to
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dough
strips.

Turn to the remaining data set. Fifth
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step
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dough
strips
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make
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noodles
discs. After this
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process
, the
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noodles
disk
is cooked
with
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oil
, then dried for
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mixed
vegetables and spices in the cups. Complete the seventh
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step
; the
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noodles
cups are ready to attach levels and seals for marketing. This is the
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end
of the
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process
of manufacturing instant noodles.

The main gradients are
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flour
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mixed
with water,
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oil
, vegetables, spices, and cooking
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oil
. All this
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process
is completed
by automatic machine.
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IELTS academic The given diagram shows manufacturing instant noodles by using eight steps.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
182 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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