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The table and chart below show the time spent at leisure and household activities in Britain. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The given bar chart and table compare how much time males and females spend on various household activities every day with the recreational activities in Britain. It is noticeable that except for repair work, women do more household work than men. On an average, women spend about 75 minutes on cooking and washing, which is more than double the time spent by men on the same activity. Shopping and doing the laundry are other two most important activities for housewives, which take 35 and 30 minutes per day respectively, whereas men are unwilling to do these chores. Men spend approximately 19 minutes per day on repair work, which is surprisingly more than double the time spent by women on the same work. With regard to leisure activities, both genders spend almost similar time on all the three given activities, with TV, video and radio being the most popular and sports taking away the least of the leisure time. About two hours per day are spent on TV, video and radio, and nearly one third of an hour per day on reading. Compared to women, men spend slightly more time on sports.
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bar chart and table compare how much
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time
males and females
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spend
on various

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household
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activities
every day with the recreational
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activities
in Britain.

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except for
repair work, women do more household work than
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men
. On

an average, women
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spend
about 75 minutes on cooking and washing, which is more than

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double
the
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time
spent by
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men
on the same
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activity
. Shopping and doing the laundry
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are


other two most
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important
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activities
for housewives, which take 35 and 30 minutes per day

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respectively
, whereas
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men
are unwilling to do these chores.
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Men
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spend
approximately 19

minutes per day on repair work, which is
surprisingly
more than double the
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time
spent by

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women
on the same work.

With regard to leisure
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activities
, both genders
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spend
almost similar
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time
on all the three

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given
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activities
, with TV, video and radio being the most popular and sports taking away the

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least
of the leisure
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time
. About two hours per day
are spent
on TV, video and radio,
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and


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nearly
one third of an hour per day on reading. Compared to women,
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men
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spend
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slightly


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more
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time
on sports.
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IELTS academic The table and chart below show the time spent at leisure and household activities in Britain.

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14 paragraphs
191 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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