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The Pie chart gives information about the country of birth of people living in Australia and the table shows where people born in these countries live. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart decribes information of the original countries of people living in australia, and the table represents where does these people's lives between towns and countrysides. From the pie it is shown that almost third of four population is originally Australian, in addition to that the second place is Netherlands with only 14%. Furthermore, UK comes to 7% of the population, while New Zealand, China, and other, percentage of 3%, 2%, and1% consecutively. Moreover, the table describes China as the most cultures to lived in town with 99% and rural areas with only 1%. Moving on, Netherlands and UK with 89% to 90% lived in cities while the other 10% chose to stay in countrysides. Lastly, Australia and New Zealand with 80% to 83% lives in cities, and from 11% to 20% stay in rural areas.
The chart
decribes
information of the original countries of
people
living in
australia
, and the table represents where does these
people
's
lives
between towns and countrysides.

From the pie it
is shown
that almost third of four population is
originally
Australian,
in addition
to that the second place is Netherlands with
only
14%.
Furthermore
, UK
comes
to 7% of the population, while New Zealand, China, and other, percentage of 3%, 2%, and1%
consecutively
.

Moreover
, the table
describes
China as the most cultures to
lived
in town with 99% and rural areas with
only
1%. Moving on, Netherlands and UK with 89% to 90%
lived
in cities while the other 10% chose to stay in countrysides.
Lastly
, Australia and New Zealand with 80% to 83%
lives
in cities, and from 11% to 20% stay in rural areas.
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IELTS academic The Pie chart gives information about the country of birth of people living in Australia and the table shows where people born in these countries live.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
136 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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