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The charts below show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart shows the reasons why people some people prefer cycling to work and following chart shows gives reasons for those choose driving. Overall, it seems that major reasons for driving are mainly due to comfort and distance to work. However for cycling health and environmental are main factors. In first pie chart, thirty percent from those people go to work by bicycle believe that it can improve their health and fitness level. Also. it is numerically, same who are using bike for reducing air pollutions. 15% of people cycle to work because it has no parking problems comparing with driving. On other hand, in second pie superiority couse for driving is it considering as comfortable way for transporting especially, during the long distance. Finally, 16 % of people say that driving is faster than cycling. In contrast 12 % of people say that cycling is speedy way for reaching a distance
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IELTS academic The charts below show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car.

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5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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