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The diagram below shows how water processed to make it drinkable.

The diagram highlights how water is processed to make it drinkable. There are several stages that take place from taking the water out of the river to sending it to our houses. Firstly, the water with the help of pumping station goes from river to the reservoir. Secondly, it goes to a clarification step. This stage include elucidation, filtration and also disinfection. In other words, clarification includes all cleaning steps. Furthermore, this process begins at the clarification tank, from which it goes through gravity filter and chlorine, what helps to remove all bits and germs. Consequently, the water goes to disribution step, which include sending clean water to storage reservoirs for our homes, schools and also workplaces. The clarification process aim is to guaranty safety and quality of the water, and to be sure of it, while drinking.
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it drinkable. There are several stages that take place from taking the
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water
out of the river to sending it to our
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houses
.
Firstly
, the
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water
with the
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help
of pumping station goes from river to the reservoir.
Secondly
, it goes to a
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clarification
step. This stage include elucidation, filtration and
also
disinfection.
In other words
,
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clarification
includes all cleaning steps.
Furthermore
, this process
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begins
at the
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clarification
tank, from which it goes through gravity filter and chlorine, what
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helps
to remove all bits and germs.
Consequently
, the
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water
goes to
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disribution
step, which include sending clean
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water
to storage reservoirs for our homes, schools and
also
workplaces. The
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clarification
process aim is to guaranty safety and quality of the
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water
, and to be sure of it, while drinking.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows how water processed to make it drinkable.

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