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The diagram below represents the “Comparison of how urban Chinese spent across major categories in 1995 versus the spending habits in 2011”. Summarise the information given in the diagrams. Write at least 150 words.

The information given in the two pie charts illustrates Urban Consumption of Chinese in two years i. e. 1995 and 2011. There are eight different categories for urban consumption. By comparing the pie charts, it can be seen that Food category has been consumed most in both the pie charts. Food accounted for half of the consumption in the year 1995 while Food accounted for 30 percent in the year 2011. Clothing has been the second most consumed category in both the years and Clothing in the year 1995 is a little more as compared to the year 2011. Residential category of both the years has been almost same. Recreation category is another category where the difference in both the years is very less but in the year 2011, it is slightly ahead. Transportation category has consumed more in the year 2011 and its way ahead of the consumption in the year 1995. Medicine category in the year 2011 is more and its more than double as compared to the year 1995. Consumption of Household facilites in boht the years is exactly same. Clothing consumption in the year 1995 is more as compared to the year 2011. The last category, Others has consumed the least in both the years but slightly more in the year 2011.
The information
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given
in the two pie charts illustrates Urban
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Consumption
of Chinese in two years
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i. e.
1995 and 2011. There are eight
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different
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categories
for urban
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consumption
. By comparing the pie charts, it can be
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seen
that Food
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category
has been
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consumed
most in both the pie charts. Food accounted for half of the
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consumption
in the
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year
1995 while Food accounted for 30 percent in the
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year
2011. Clothing has been the second most
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consumed
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category
in both the years and Clothing in the
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year
1995 is a
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little
more
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as
compared to the
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year
2011. Residential
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category
of both the years has been almost same. Recreation
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category
is another
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category
where the difference in both the years is
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very
less
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but
in the
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year
2011, it is
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ahead. Transportation
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category
has
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consumed
more in the
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year
2011 and its way ahead of the
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consumption
in the
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year
1995. Medicine
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category
in the
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year
2011 is more and its more than double as compared to the
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year
1995.
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Consumption
of Household
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facilites
in
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boht
the years is exactly same. Clothing
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consumption
in the
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year
1995 is more
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as
compared to the
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year
2011. The last
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category
, Others has
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consumed
the least in both the years
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but
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more in the
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year
2011.
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