Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The table and chart below show the time spent at leisure and household activities in Britain. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The given table and bar chart demonstrates the amount of time spent by males and females on household chores and recreational activities in Britain. Overall, it can be noticed that both the sexes are spending least time on sports related activities, and most time on household chores. In the given graph, both the genders are spending the highest amount of time on doing cleaning and washing, which is just above 20 minutes for men, and just below 80 minutes for women. However, a fair amount of time, just around 20 minutes and 40 minutes are spent by both men and women on shopping respectively. Although, both the genders have contradicting involvement in repair works and clothes washing and ironing, with men contributing less in washing and ironing and vice versa. On the contrary, the table shows that the maximum amount of time is spent on TV, Video and Radio, which is just around couple of hours for both the sexes. In addition, both males and females are only spending under 20 minutes on reading and sports activities
The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
table and bar chart demonstrates the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
amount
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
spent by males and females on household chores and recreational activities in Britain.

Overall
, it can
be noticed
that both the sexes are spending
A determiner is probably missing here: "the least".
least
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
on sports related activities, and most
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
on household chores.

In the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
graph, both the genders are spending the highest
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
amount
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
on
The usual collocation for an activity ending in "-ing" is "go" not "do" or "play." Revise: "going cleaning".
doing cleaning
and washing, which is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
above 20 minutes for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
men
, and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
below 80 minutes for women.
However
, a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fair
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
amount
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
around 20 minutes and 40 minutes
are spent
by both
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
men
and women on shopping
respectively
. Although, both the genders have contradicting involvement in repair works and clothes washing and ironing, with
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
men
contributing less in washing and ironing and vice versa.

On the contrary
, the table
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
shows
that the maximum
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
amount
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
is spent
on TV, Video and Radio, which is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
around couple of hours for both the sexes.
In addition
, both males and females are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
spending under 20 minutes on reading and sports
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
activities
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic The table and chart below show the time spent at leisure and household activities in Britain.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
176 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • The table and chart below show the time spent at leisure and household activities in Britain. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.