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The table and bar chart reveal statistics of the proportion change in the usage of broadband connection in five various countries.

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The table and bar chart reveal statistics of the proportion change in the usage of broadband connection in five various countries. Overall, it is clear that the percentage of broadband connections illustrates the use of the internet was highest in the USA and South Korea. In addition, the change in consumption of broadband was highest in Britain, compared with other developed countries. As per information, in South Korea, consumption slightly increased by about 13. 4 percent with 20 plus connections. In contrast, Britain showed 10. 8 percent of growth with 230 plus connections, which is the highest number of connections witnessed by any developed country. Especially, the use of broadband connections dramatically increased in the USA from 9. 3 percent to reach a peak of 25. 1 percent with 170 plus connections. In sharp contrast to this, the use of broadband connections in Germany and Switzerland only increased to 5. 6 percent with 80 plus connections, and 7. 9 percent with 120 plus connections respectively. Regardless of the change, the consumption of broadband significantly increased in all the developed countries.
The table and bar chart reveal statistics of the proportion
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change
in the usage of broadband
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connection
in five various countries.

Overall
, it is
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clear
that the percentage of broadband
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connections
illustrates the
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use
of the internet was highest in the USA and South Korea.
In addition
, the
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change
in consumption of broadband was highest in Britain, compared with other
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developed countries
.

As per information, in South Korea, consumption
slightly
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increased
by about 13. 4
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percent
with 20 plus
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connections
.
In contrast
, Britain
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showed
10. 8
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percent
of growth with 230 plus
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connections
, which is the highest number of
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connections
witnessed by any
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developed country
.
Especially
, the
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use
of broadband
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connections
dramatically
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increased
in the USA from 9. 3
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percent
to reach a peak of 25. 1
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percent
with 170 plus connections.

In sharp contrast to this, the
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use
of broadband
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connections
in Germany and Switzerland
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only
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increased
to 5. 6
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percent
with 80 plus
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connections
, and 7. 9
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percent
with 120 plus
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connections
respectively
. Regardless of the
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change
, the consumption of broadband
significantly
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increased
in all the
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developed countries
.
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IELTS academic The table and bar chart reveal statistics of the proportion change in the usage of broadband connection in five various countries.

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