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Talk about your hometown.

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I grew up in a little village in Phu Tho. It was serene. It is relaxing. Although Phu Tho does not have a thousand-year history of civilisation like Thang Long - Hanoi - I am nonetheless proud of this ancestral country. Visitors to Phu Tho's ancestral country must see the Hung Temple statues. Our country's Hung Kings are worshipped here, along with other historical and cultural relics. Visitors to Phu Tho can see the tea forest and palm slope. The Phu Tho people are pure-hearted, unpretentious, and love travelers. I love my hometown.
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Tho. It was serene. It is relaxing. Although
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Tho does not have a thousand-year history of
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Thang
Long
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Hanoi
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I am nonetheless proud of this ancestral country. Visitors to
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Phu
Tho's ancestral country
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the Hung Temple statues. Our country's Hung Kings are
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worshipped
here, along with other historical and cultural relics. Visitors to
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Phu
Tho can
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the tea forest and palm slope. The
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Tho
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are pure-hearted, unpretentious, and
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IELTS academic Talk about your hometown.

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
93 words
This writing has been penalized,
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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