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Describe the given bar graph.

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The given bar graph illustrates the amount of money spent on various types of entertainment, which are cinema, video, music, publishing and television in different nations, between 1995 and 2000. Overall, it can clearly be seen that most of the money spent is on publishing and television, whereas the least money spent is on cinema and video. Looking at the graph in more detail, in 1995 and 2000, Asian people spent money was about 67 and 110 in which publishing and television were in demand than cinema and video, between 1995 and 2000. Moreover, Europeans also showed interest in publishing and TV, which was around 97 and 131. On the other hand, Americans were the highest in spending money for all the five forms of entertainment which were around 184 and 257, in comparison with the other countries from 1995 to 2000 respectively. However, cinema was stood at around 52, but rose by almost 100 in 2000.
The
given
bar graph illustrates the amount of
money
spent on various types of entertainment, which are
cinema
, video, music,
publishing
and television in
different
nations, between 1995 and 2000.

Overall
, it can
clearly
be
seen
that most of the
money
spent is on
publishing
and television, whereas the least
money
spent is on
cinema
and video.

Looking at the graph in more detail, in 1995 and 2000, Asian
people
spent

money was about 67 and 110 in which
publishing
and television were in demand than
cinema
and video, between 1995 and 2000.
Moreover
, Europeans
also
showed
interest in
publishing
and TV, which was around 97 and 131.

On the other hand
, Americans were the highest in spending
money
for all the five forms of entertainment which were around 184 and 257,
in comparison
with the other countries from 1995 to 2000
respectively
.
However
,
cinema
was stood
at around 52,
but
rose by almost 100 in 2000.
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