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The table above illustrates us people’s reasons for giving up smoking, and when they intend to give up smoking.

The table above illustrates us people’s reasons for giving up smoking, and when they intend to give up smoking. dp2mP
The table above illustrates us people’s reasons for giving up smoking, and when they intend to give up smoking. The chief reason that smoker wanting to stop smoking due to it was better for health, financial considerations, less risk of getting smoking illness, family pressure and present help problems. Heavy smokers intend to give up smoking less than light smokers that smoked fewer than 10 rolls per day. From the table above, the amount of cigarettes of people that have present health problem and family pressure is about 10-20 percent. Moreover, most smokers that want to take less risk of getting smoking illness take a cigarettes about 10-19 rolls same as smokers that have financial considerations. While smoker that intend to give up smoking within the next 6 month have most rate of cigarettes roll no more than 10, most smokers that give up smoking within the next year smoke about 10-19 rolls.
The table above illustrates us
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smoking
, and when they intend to
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give
up smoking.

The chief reason that smoker wanting to
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stop
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smoking
due to it was better for health, financial considerations, less
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risk
of getting
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smoking
illness, family pressure and present
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help
problems. Heavy smokers intend to
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give
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smoking
less than light smokers that smoked fewer than 10 rolls per day.

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people
that have present health problem and family pressure is about 10-20 percent.
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, most smokers that want to take less
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of getting
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smoking
illness take
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about 10-19 rolls same as smokers that have financial considerations. While smoker that intend to
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give
up
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smoking
within the
next
6 month have most rate of cigarettes roll no more than 10, most smokers that
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give
up
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within the
next
year smoke about 10-19 rolls.
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IELTS academic The table above illustrates us people’s reasons for giving up smoking, and when they intend to give up smoking.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
153 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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