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Scientists and shifting from around the world such as Greta Thunberg have warned about the negative impact of global warming and the point of no return where they believe the damage done to the planet through carbon emissions will be irreversible. Discuss to what extent you agree with this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Scientists and shifting from around the world such as Greta Thunberg have warned about the negative impact of global warming and the point of no return where they believe the damage done to the planet through carbon emissions will be irreversible. Discuss kL38M
It is undeniable that global warming is being increased day by day where there are many reasons behind it. As a result, every day we have to face many difficulties and the majority of the damages are not possible to retrieve. However, to think of some possible actions to get rid of it, firstly we have to make awareness among people about it. The emissions of Carbon dioxide and other GHGS are very common activities related to fossil fuels; for example, coal and gas while the impact is working very negatively in the environment. As a consequence, we have to face climate change and also the capital ice caps are being melted for it and for this nowadays many developed countries like Canada, USA and many more are facing floods. Since carbon emission is a kind of greenhouse gas and which causes when carbon dioxide enters into the air later than a human activity like driving vehicles by gas installing and also running the agricultural industry like factories and so on. This sort of activity causes many health diseases too; for instance, the problem of taking a breath or cough and other nasal problems causes by taking toxic air while taking a breath. The gases in the polluted air affect badly the body of children and old people. Sometimes, many serious problems like cancer can be caused by it. In contrast, to the damage on planet, they cause extreme weather like too hot in the summer and also strome and flood and during that disaster, we lose many lives in the world. To conclude the total sum of the discussion, I would like to say that the drawbacks of carbon emission are huge and irreversible. This is why we all should make awareness among people around us to stop burning the gas in the air and also we should think of some alternatives of it.
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being increased
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day where
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reasons behind it.
As a result
, every day we
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have to
face
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difficulties and the majority of the damages are not possible to retrieve.
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think
of
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some
possible actions to
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have to
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make
awareness among
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The emissions of
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dioxide and other
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GHGS
are
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very
common activities related to fossil fuels;
for example
, coal and
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gas
while the impact is working
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very
negatively
in the environment. As a consequence, we
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have to
face climate
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change
and
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being melted
for it and for this nowadays
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many
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developed countries
like Canada, USA and
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many
more are facing floods. Since
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carbon
emission is a kind of greenhouse
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gas
and which
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causes
when
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carbon
dioxide enters into the
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air
later than a human activity like driving vehicles by
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gas
installing and
also
running the agricultural industry like factories and
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so
on. This sort of activity
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causes
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many
health diseases too;
for instance
, the problem of taking a breath or cough and other nasal problems
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causes
by taking toxic
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air
while taking a breath. The gases in the polluted
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air
affect
badly
the body of children and
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people
.
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Sometimes
,
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serious problems like cancer can
be caused
by it.
In contrast
, to the damage on planet, they
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extreme weather like too hot in the summer and
also
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strome
and flood and during that disaster, we lose
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many
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lives
in the world.
To conclude
the total sum of the discussion, I would like to say that the drawbacks of
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carbon
emission are huge and irreversible. This is why we all should
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make
awareness among
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people
around us to
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stop
burning the
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gas
in the
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air
and
also
we should
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think
of
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alternatives of it.
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IELTS academic Scientists and shifting from around the world such as Greta Thunberg have warned about the negative impact of global warming and the point of no return where they believe the damage done to the planet through carbon emissions will be irreversible. Discuss

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