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The table above compares different areas of the UK in terms of the numbers of residents cycling to work between 2001 and 2011.

The table above compares different areas of the UK in terms of the numbers of residents cycling to work between 2001 and 2011. j8d8p
The table above compares different areas of the UK in terms of the numbers of residents cycling to work between 2001 and 2011. Between 2001 and 2011, the number of people riding to work in various parts of the UK increased steadily. London had by far the highest number of cycling commuters in both years. As can be seen in the data, in 2001, inner London came in first with 43, 494 commuters who cycle to work, this number went up considerably with 144% percentage change in cycling. Outer London, on the other hand, was second in terms of the amount of riding done by inhabitants in 2001, but the percentage change was the lowest in 2011 compared to the rest of the areas. Additionally, Brighton and Hove experienced the second biggest growth in 2011, with a 109 percent increase. A similar pattern could be seen in Bristol with a 94% increase in the percentage of residents who cycle to work. Figures for the other areas were below the ten thousand mark in both years.
The table above compares
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areas of the UK in terms of the
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numbers
of residents cycling to
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work
between 2001 and 2011.

Between 2001 and 2011, the
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number
of
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people
riding to
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in various parts of the UK increased
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. London had by far the highest
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number
of cycling commuters in both years.

As can be
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in the data, in 2001, inner London came in
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with 43, 494 commuters who cycle to
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work
, this
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number
went up
considerably
with 144% percentage
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in cycling. Outer London,
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, was second in terms of the amount of riding done by inhabitants in 2001,
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the percentage
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was the lowest in 2011 compared to the rest of the areas.

Additionally
, Brighton and Hove experienced the second biggest growth in 2011, with a 109 percent increase. A similar pattern could be
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seen
in Bristol with a 94% increase in the percentage of residents who cycle to
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work
. Figures for the other areas were below the ten thousand mark in both years.
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IELTS academic The table above compares different areas of the UK in terms of the numbers of residents cycling to work between 2001 and 2011.

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