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The given line graph illustrates how the coffee exports changed in three different nations over a 10-year period.

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The given line graph illustrates how the coffee exports changed in three different nations over a 10-year period. It is noticeable that all 3 countries experienced an upward trend during the research period with the figure of Brazil being the highest. In 2002, the coffee export from Costa Rica was by far the highest, with 15 million kilograms while the figures for Brazil and Colombia were much lower, at 13% and 5% respectively. In the next 4-year period, there was a significant decline of 7% in the amount of coffee exported in Costa Rica in contrast to the gradual increases of between 5% and 7% in the figures for the other two countries. It is noted that during the period between 2006 and 2008, Brazil and Costa Rica exports underwent an upward trend, while Colombia constantly decreased and crashed at 3% in 2008. Over the period of the next 4 years, Costa Rica witnessed the most dramatic growth to 20 million kilograms. At the same time, there were increases to 15 million kilograms and 25 million in the amount of coffee exported from Colombia and Brazil.
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exports
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in three
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nations over a 10-year period.

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period
with the figure of Brazil being the highest.

In 2002, the
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coffee
export from Costa Rica was by far the highest, with 15
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million
kilograms while the figures for Brazil and Colombia were much lower, at 13% and 5%
respectively
. In the
next
4-year
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period
, there was a significant decline of 7% in the amount of
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coffee
exported in Costa Rica
in contrast
to the gradual increases of between 5% and 7% in the figures for the other two countries.

It
is noted
that during the
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period
between 2006 and 2008, Brazil and Costa Rica exports underwent an upward trend, while Colombia
constantly
decreased and crashed at 3% in 2008. Over the
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period
of the
next
4 years, Costa Rica witnessed the most dramatic growth to 20
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million
kilograms. At the same time, there were increases to 15
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million
kilograms and 25
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million
in the amount of
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coffee
exported from Colombia and Brazil.
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IELTS academic The given line graph illustrates how the coffee exports changed in three different nations over a 10-year period.

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