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The supplied line graph illustrates the information about noise to the environment health authorities which in the Newtown city from 1980 to 1996.

The supplied line graph illustrates the information about noise to the environment health authorities which in the Newtown city from 1980 to 1996. NEej
The supplied line graph illustrates the information about noise to the environment health authorities which in the Newtown city from 1980 to 1996. To commence with, number of complaints was about 600 by the construction of roads in 1980 and it is slightly decrease around 200 in the year 1988. After that, it remains stable in 1990, but, plethora of complaints was decline approximately 100 in the last period. While, in the factories, number of complaints received by the authorities around 400 in 1980 and thereafter, it was experienced gradually incline nearly 700 in the 1996. Probing ahead, complaints was launched due to noise of traffic about 300 in the 1980 and after two years it was slowly decline till 1986. However, it remains stable till 1988 then it experienced highly increase approximately 600 in the last period. Whereas, the domestic noise of complaints around 500 in 1980 and it remains same until 1984. After that, itdecline slowly in 1984 but in the last period it was slightly increase. Overall, it is crystal clear that minimum number of the complaints was seen in the road works. On the other hand, noise from the household was maximum rather than other sources.
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to the environment health authorities which in the
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city from 1980 to 1996. To commence with, number of
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complaints
was about 600 by the construction of roads in 1980 and it is
slightly
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decrease
around 200 in the year 1988. After that, it remains stable in 1990,
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, plethora of
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complaints
was decline approximately 100 in the last period. While, in the factories, number of
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complaints
received by the authorities around 400 in 1980 and thereafter, it
was experienced
gradually
incline
nearly
700 in the 1996. Probing ahead,
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complaints
was launched
due to
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noise
of traffic about 300 in the 1980 and after two years it was
slowly
decline till 1986.
However
, it remains stable till 1988 then it experienced
highly
increase approximately 600 in the last period. Whereas, the domestic
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noise
of
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complaints
around 500 in 1980 and it remains same until 1984. After that,
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itdecline
slowly
in 1984
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but
in the last period it was
slightly
increase.
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, it is crystal
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that minimum number of the
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complaints
was
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seen
in the road works.
On the other hand
,
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from the household was maximum
rather
than other sources.
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IELTS academic The supplied line graph illustrates the information about noise to the environment health authorities which in the Newtown city from 1980 to 1996.

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