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The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

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The supplied process illustrates the stages of bricks manufactured for the building industry. In general, we can observe that brick manufacturing process is a complex one involving many stages. The process begins with digging the clay and gridding it through roller. Following this, sand and water then mix and go through wire cutter so that to make in the shape of brick. After that, these products are dried for 24 through 48 hours. And the next stage involves heating them under average 200*-980*, and 870*-1300*. And this continues with cooling for 2-3 days. Prior to being delivered to the building industry, bricks are packed.
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bricks
manufactured for the building industry.

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brick
manufacturing process is a complex one involving
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many
stages.

The process
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begins
with digging the clay and
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gridding
it through roller. Following this, sand and water then mix and go through wire cutter
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that to
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make
in the shape of
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brick
. After that, these products
are dried
for 24 through 48 hours. And the
next
stage involves heating them under average 200*-
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980*,
and 870*-
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1300*.
And this continues with cooling for 2-3 days. Prior to
being delivered
to the building industry,
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bricks
are packed
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IELTS academic The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.

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3 paragraphs
104 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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