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The bar chart below gives the information about the rate of Australian men and women by different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

The bar chart below gives the information about the rate of Australian men and women by different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. 8Ybx
The bar chart below gives the information about the rate of Australian men and women by different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Overall, it is clear that the percentage of women who did regularly activity is always higher than the percentage of men from the age of 25. From 15 years old to 24 years old, there is a difference, the percentage of men is higher than the percentage of women, it is 52. 8% in men and 47. 7% in women. The percentage of women went up from 15 years old to 54 years old, from 54 years old, it went down, while the percentage of men went up from 35 years old. However, the percentage of men couldn't be higher than the percentage of women excepts the age group 15 to 24. The highest number in the bar chart belongs to Australian women, it is 53. 3%, while the highest rate of men is 52. 8%, at the age of 15 and 24.
The bar chart below gives the information about the rate of Australian
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IELTS academic The bar chart below gives the information about the rate of Australian men and women by different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

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