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The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000.

The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000. Ge0j
The line graph shows percentage of industry of Service and IT in Gross Domestic Product during from 1992 to 2000. In brief, IT increased sharply fin 1992 and 2000 except for 2 years from 1994 while Service industry steedly from 1992 to 2000 In detail, IT industry stared at just over 6 per cent, it went up to about 8 percent in1992 to 1994, however it was stead decrease in 1996 and it increased dramatically to over 14 per cnet from 1996 to 2000. Service industry was sharp develop at 4 per cent to more than 6 per cent for 2 years, it grew smoothly during 1994 to 2000.
The line graph
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percentage of
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industry
of Service and IT in Gross Domestic Product during from 1992 to 2000.

In brief
, IT increased
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fin 1992 and 2000
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except for
2 years from 1994 while Service
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industry
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steedly
from 1992 to 2000

In detail, IT
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industry
stared at
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over 6 per cent, it went up to about 8 percent in1992 to 1994,
however
it was stead decrease in 1996 and it increased
dramatically
to over 14 per
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cnet
from 1996 to 2000.

Service
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industry
was sharp develop at 4 per cent to more than 6 per cent for 2 years, it grew
smoothly
during 1994 to 2000.

IELTS academic The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000.

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