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the states of the writing process

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As I used to have a period of time focusing on learning writing, I understand that it is really difficult to write confidently in English and most learners find it quite confused because they do not know how to improve it effectively. From my point of view, I support the view and my reasons will be explained in the following paragraph. According to my practical experience, the reason that making learners can not write confidently in English because they do not know the way how to write and they have the mentality of being afraid of writing wrong. I used to learn a subject called Writing 2 and my teacher taught me how to write a good paragraph. To be honest, my grammar was really bad and I always find confused when I have a writing lesson. However, I decided to begin with simple sentence structures and follow the stages of the writing process that my teacher had taught me. As a result, my writing skill has improved clearly and I got 4. 5/6 in the final test. The first step in the writing process is brainstorming. It means I will read the topic carefully and use a mind map to list two or three main ideas. The next step is that I have to write down some supporting points for each main idea and organize it reasonably. Then, I will write a draft to have an overview and edit the draft with cohesion and linking ideas. And the last step is writing the final copy. By using the stages of the writing process, I could improve my writing skill effectively. Besides, I also used the platform named Grammarly as a partner to correct my writings and I could realize my mistakes. Although my writing skills still need a lot of improvement, at least now I can write confidently and I know what I should write with a random topic. In conclusion, I encourage people try to follow the stages of the writing process and have an editor to improve their writing skill. And I believe that the only way can help us write confidently in English is to practice and follow these ways mentioned above.
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in English and most learners find it quite confused
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explained
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According to my practical experience, the reason that making learners can not
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confidently
in English
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because
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write and
they have the mentality of being afraid of
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writing
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wrong
. I
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to learn a subject called
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Writing
2 and my teacher taught me how to
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write
a
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good
paragraph. To be honest, my grammar was
really
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bad
and I always find confused when I have a
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writing
lesson.
However
, I decided to
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begin
with simple sentence structures and follow the stages of the
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writing
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process
that my teacher had taught me.
As a result
, my
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writing
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skill
has
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improved
clearly
and I
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got
4. 5/6 in the final
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test
. The
first
step in the
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writing
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process
is brainstorming. It means I will read the topic
carefully
and
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use
a mind map to list two or three main
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ideas
. The
next
step is that I
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have to
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write
down
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some
supporting points for each main
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idea
and organize it
reasonably
. Then, I will
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write
a draft to have an overview and edit the draft with cohesion and linking
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ideas
. And the last step is
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writing
the final copy. By using the stages of the
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writing
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process
, I could
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improve
my
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writing
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skill
effectively
.
Besides
, I
also
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used
the platform named
Grammarly
as a partner to correct my
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writings
and I could realize my mistakes. Although my
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writing
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skills
still
need
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a lot of
improvement, at least
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now
I can
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write
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confidently
and I know what I should
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write
with a random topic.

In conclusion
, I encourage
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people
try to follow the stages of the
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writing
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process
and have an editor to
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improve
their
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writing
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skill
. And I believe that the
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only
way can
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help
us
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confidently
in English is to practice and follow these ways mentioned above.
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IELTS academic the states of the writing process

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
366 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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