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The line graph shows the predicted growth in the total global audience for iTV from 2012 to 2019

The line graph shows the predicted growth in the total global audience for iTV from 2012 to 2019 6mW98
The line graph shows the predicted growth in the total global audience for iTV from 2012 to 2019. The bar chart compares predicted trends in the number of viewers of this service in five world regions. It can be seen that, overall, the iTV audience is expected to increase during this period. However, from 2017 to 2019, growth is forecast in only two of the five regions. Regarding the total global audience, aside from a predicted fall of 6 million in 2016, the number of viewers should rise steadily during this period. From 132 million at the start of the period, it is forecast to rise to 156 million by 2019. On average this is a rise of about 4 million viewers per year. However, the bar chart shows significant changes in the way this total audience will be distributed between the different world regions. The vast majority of viewers are predicted to be located in just two of the five regions: Africa and the Middle East, and Asia and the Pacific. Between 2017 and 2019, these audiences are forecast to grow by 10 million and 6 million, respectively. In contrast, audience sizes in Eurasia and Europe are expected to decrease steadily over the same period. In 2017, the audience for the former is predicted to be around 13 million and for the latter 15 million. By 2019, these figures are expected to fall by 3 million and 2 million, respectively. The smallest audience size will probably be seen in the Americas, remaining stable at around 8 million throughout the period. In conclusion, over the period described, iTV is predicted to grow but with a less widely dispersed audience.
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