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The bar chart demonstrates the percentage of woman who unemployed in four countries of United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014. Generally, the rates of female unemployment in Scotland increased, while that in England, Wales and Northern Ireland decreased. As seen from the chart, the unemployment rates of woman who live in England maked up 6. 8% in 2013. In Scotland, that of woman was 6. 1%, which was 0. 7% less than that of England. The female unemployment rates in Northern Ireland has a lower percentage with 5. 6%, while the lowest rates was 5, 4% in Wales. As opposed to this, the percentage of unemployed women in the UK decreased in 2014. That of unemployed women declined slightly in England and Wale, which is 0, 3% and 0, 4% respectively. Northern Ireland's share of the population falls from 5. 6 percent in 2013 to 4. 6 percent the following year, a 1 percent decline. By comparision, the percentage of unemployed women in 2014 is 6, 7%, which 0, 6% more than that in 2013.

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