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The diagram shows the process involved in the production of energy from coal

The diagram shows the process involved in the production of energy from coal aQXpd
The diagram shows the process involved in the production of energy from coal. It is clear that the production of energy from coal requires many stages, beginning with the uses of coal and oxygen. Looking from perspective, the coal and oxygen are delivered and gone through many chemical processes. First of all, the oxygen is burned in a large furnance and the raw syngas is produced from this. Following that, some harmful substances like CO2 or mercury and sulphur are removed. After that, people use purified syngas to drive a gas turbine and the turbine connected to a generator to produce electricity. The gas turbine also produces hot exhaust gases and then piped to heat recovery steam generator and converts into steam. The steam is subsequently used to power a steam turbine, which again is used to generate electricity.
The diagram
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shows
the process involved in the production of energy from coal. It is
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clear
that the production of energy from coal requires
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many
stages, beginning with the
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uses
of coal and oxygen. Looking from perspective, the coal and oxygen
are delivered
and gone through
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many
chemical processes.
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First of all
, the oxygen
is burned
in a large
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furnance
and the raw
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syngas
is produced
from this. Following that,
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some
harmful substances like CO2 or mercury and
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sulphur
are removed
. After that,
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people
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use
purified
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syngas
to drive a gas
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turbine
and the
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turbine
connected to a generator to produce electricity. The gas
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turbine
also
produces hot exhaust gases and then piped to heat recovery steam generator and converts into steam. The steam is
subsequently
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used
to power a steam
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turbine
, which again is
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used
to generate electricity.
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IELTS academic The diagram shows the process involved in the production of energy from coal

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