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The stacked bar chart illustrates how much time parents and their children spend together on weekdays and weekends.

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The stacked bar chart illustrates how much time parents and their children spend together on weekdays and weekends. looking in the graph, it is immediately obvious that on almost weekdays, children often allocate time with their mom in most 5 groups (from 0-9 age). Meanwhile, on the weekends, both moms and dads put into their free time for taking care of their children. In terms of weekdays, on advantage, the kids in all age groups have 8. 5 - 9 hours with their parents. To be more particular, while the highest amount of time children spend with their fathers is in the 4-5 age group (with 2, 2 hours per day), in the 6-7 years old group this time for kids just accounts for 1 hours. By contrast, mothers have a large amount of time for their childrens, approximately 6 hours in each day for all age groups. In addition, on weekends, the amount of time for families is higher than on weekdays. This highest and lowest figure is in the 4-5 age group with roughly 10, 2 hours and in the 0-1 age group with 8. 9 hours, respectively. At the same time, the time childrens stay with only dad or mom are significantly less, half as much as they are with both dad and mom.
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parents and their
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spend together on weekdays and weekends.

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allocate
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with their
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in most 5
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. Meanwhile, on the weekends, both
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and dads put into their free
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for taking care of their children.

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have 8.
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5 - 9
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with their parents. To be more particular, while the highest amount of
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spend with their fathers is in the 4-5
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(with 2, 2
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per day), in the 6-7 years
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for kids
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groups.

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with roughly 10, 2
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with 8. 9
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IELTS academic The stacked bar chart illustrates how much time parents and their children spend together on weekdays and weekends.

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