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the bar chart below shows the number of visitors at three malls in some city between 1995 and 2015

the bar chart below shows the number of visitors at three malls in some city between 1995 and 2015 A3M6w

The assigned graph depicts the changing number of visitors at mall in some city between 1995 and 2015. It is noticeable that over the period of 20 years, there is a statistical increases in visitors at mall. Luxury mall had 1, 20, 000 visitors in 1995 which later kept on increasing. It reached the mark of 1, 80, 000 by year 2015. While Bigshop mall initially had around 90, 000 people visiting, which then drastically rose up to almost 1, 80, 000 in 2010. However the sum of people visiting over the next 5 years were leveled off. Similarly, in Spendnsave mall from the period of 1995 to 2000, there was no change in the number of visitants. Although there was an upward trend after the year 2000 which drastically increased the sum of 20, 000 constitently for every 5 years that is in 2005, 2010 and 2015 the number increased to 80, 000, 10, 000 and 1, 20, 000 respectively

The assigned graph depicts the changing number of visitors at You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshopping centerplazamarketshopping mall
mall
 in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 city between 1995 and 2015. It is noticeable that over the period of 20 years, there is a statistical increases in visitors at mall.

Luxury You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshopping centerplazamarketshopping mall
mall
 had 1, 20, 000 visitors in 1995 which later This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 on increasing. It reached the mark of 1, 80, 000 by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 2015. While Possible spelling mistake found.BishopBig shop
Bigshop
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshopping centerplazamarketshopping mall
mall
initially
 had around 90, 000 This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 visiting, which then drastically
 rose up to almost 1, 80, 000 in 2010. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?However,
However
 the sum of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 visiting over the next
 5 years were leveled
 off.

Similarly
, in Possible spelling mistake found.
Spendnsave
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshopping centerplazamarketshopping mall
mall
 from the period of 1995 to 2000, there was no This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 in the number of visitants. Although there was an upward trend after the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 2000 which drastically
 increased the sum of 20, 000 Possible spelling mistake found.consistently
constitently
 for every 5 years that is
 in 2005, 2010 and 2015 the number increased to 80, 000, 10, 000 and 1, 20, 000 Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphrespectively.respectively!respectively?respectively:respectively,respectively;
respectively