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the science park in 2008 and now

the science park in 2008 and now 0wgW3

The maps detail alterations to a science park dating back to 2008 to the present day. Looking from an overall perspective, it is conspicuously seen that there has been spectacular developments. Moreover, the park used to be very green but it has become much more industrialized. Begin with the northern side of the park, in 2008 there was considerable natural land which has now been replaced with the research and development center. Furthermore, the reception area was also removed in favor of a university hub, however, the adjacent offices remain absolutely the same as in the past. In addition, in the eastern side of the park has been paved a cycle path. The parking zone located in the central side of the park has been reduced in size whereas business units remain the same. Most significantly, the cyber security building has been widened on account of previous undeveloped land. Past the place of online safety has been added a new station on the southernmost walkways. One further development is the IT center has been converted into an innovation center

The maps detail alterations to a science You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 dating back to 2008 to the present day.

Looking from an overall
 perspective, it is conspicuously
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that there has been spectacular developments. Moreover
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 green This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it has become much more industrialized.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
Begin
 with the northern side of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
, in 2008 there was considerable natural land which has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
been replaced
 with the research and development center. Furthermore
, the reception area was also
 removed in favor of a university hub, however
, the adjacent offices remain absolutely
 the same as in the past. In addition
, in the eastern side of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 has been paved
 a cycle path.

The parking zone located in the central side of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
 in size whereas business units remain the same. Most significantly
, the cyber security building has been widened
 on account of previous undeveloped land. Past the place of online safety has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 a new station on the southernmost walkways. One further
 development is the IT center has been converted
 into an innovation Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphcenter.center!center?center:center,center;
center