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THE LINE GRAPH ILLUSTRATE THE SUMMARY OF CARBON DIOXIDE (CO2) EMISSIONS PER PERSON IN 4 WESTERN COUNTRY WHICH IS UK, SWEDEN, ITALY AND PORTUGAL FROM 1967 TO 2007. OVERALL, IN THE BEGIN OF THE PERIOD (1967), UK IS THE HIGHEST AND PORTUGAL IS THE LOWEST OF CARBON DIOXIDE PER PERSON. IN THE END OF THE PERIOD, UK STILL THE HIGHEST BUT BOTH SWEDEN AND PORTUGAL HAVE THE LOWEST CO2 EMISSIONS. FROM THE BEGINNING TO THE MIDDLE OF THE PERIOD, UK SLIGHTLLY DECREASE FROM 11 TO APPROXIMATELY 10 BUT UK STILL THE HIGHEST. SWEDEN SHARPLY INCREASE AND THEN FALL INTO 7. ITALY AND PORTUGAL ARE RISE NOT MUCH. ITALY RISE FROM 4 TO 7 AND PORTUGAL INCREASE FROM 1 TO 3. AT THE END. UK CONTINUE DROP INTO 7. SWEDEN CONTINUE FALL OF INTO 5. 5. ITALY AND PORTUGAL STILL CLIMB UP. TO SUM UP, UK IS THE HIGHEST WITH 7, SECOND IS ITALY WITH APPROXIMATELY 8. AT THE LOWEST SPOT IS SWEDEN AND PORTUGAL WITH 5.
THE LINE GRAPH ILLUSTRATE THE SUMMARY OF CARBON DIOXIDE (CO2) EMISSIONS PER PERSON IN 4 WESTERN COUNTRY WHICH IS UK, SWEDEN, ITALY AND PORTUGAL

FROM 1967 TO 2007.

OVERALL
, IN THE
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OF THE PERIOD (1967), UK IS THE HIGHEST AND PORTUGAL IS THE LOWEST OF CARBON DIOXIDE PER PERSON. IN THE
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OF THE PERIOD, UK
STILL
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BOTH SWEDEN AND PORTUGAL HAVE THE LOWEST CO2 EMISSIONS.

FROM THE BEGINNING TO THE MIDDLE OF THE PERIOD, UK
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SLIGHTLLY
DECREASE FROM 11 TO APPROXIMATELY 10
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UK
STILL
THE HIGHEST. SWEDEN
SHARPLY
INCREASE AND THEN FALL INTO 7. ITALY AND PORTUGAL ARE RISE NOT MUCH. ITALY RISE FROM 4 TO 7 AND PORTUGAL INCREASE FROM 1 TO 3. AT THE
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END
. UK CONTINUE DROP INTO 7. SWEDEN CONTINUE FALL OF INTO 5. 5. ITALY AND PORTUGAL
STILL
CLIMB UP. TO SUM UP, UK IS THE HIGHEST WITH 7, SECOND IS ITALY WITH APPROXIMATELY 8. AT THE LOWEST SPOT IS SWEDEN AND PORTUGAL WITH 5.
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