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The table gives information about how many people have been to Ashdown Museum during the year before and after it was refurbished . The charts illustrates the consequence of polls asking travelers about their level of satisfaction when came here, at the same time.

The table gives information about how many people have been to Ashdown Museum during the year before and after it was refurbished. The charts illustrates the consequence of polls asking travelers about their level of satisfaction when came here, at the same time. VymlQ
The table gives information about how many people have been to Ashdown Museum during the year before and after it was refurbished. The pie charts illustrate the consequence of polls asking travelers about their level of satisfaction when came here, at the same time. Overall, the number of visitors increased significantly in this stage. Similarly, the proportion of people feeling satisfied was also rose considerably during the year refurbishment. The total number of travelers went up from 74, 000 to 92, 000. It can be seen that the proportion of people satisfying and very satisfying increased by around 10 and 20, respectively. Turning to the remaining categories. The figure for those feeling unpleasant dropped significantly between 40 and 15. Similarly, the rate of those very dissatisfying also fell roughly by around 5%. And the sole category that remained unchanged was the number of people having no response during the period shown.
The table gives information about how
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Ashdown
Museum during the year
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and after it
was refurbished
. The pie charts illustrate the consequence of polls asking travelers about their level of satisfaction when came here, at the same time.

Overall
, the number of visitors increased
significantly
in this stage.
Similarly
, the proportion of
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people
feeling satisfied was
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rose
considerably
during the year refurbishment.

The total number of travelers went up from 74, 000 to 92, 000. It can be
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seen
that the proportion of
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people
satisfying and
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very
satisfying increased by around 10 and 20,
respectively
.

Turning to the remaining categories. The figure for those feeling unpleasant dropped
significantly
between 40 and 15.
Similarly
, the rate of those
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very
dissatisfying
also
fell roughly by around 5%. And the sole category that remained unchanged was the number of
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people
having no response during the period shown.
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IELTS academic The table gives information about how many people have been to Ashdown Museum during the year before and after it was refurbished. The charts illustrates the consequence of polls asking travelers about their level of satisfaction when came here, at the same time.

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6.5
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