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the changes in the layout of the university

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The supplied map compares the development which took place in the Layout of the Woodwards University in the period from 1985 till now. Overall, it is lucid that Woodwards University has undergone radical alteration approximately over 35 years period. It is intriguing to note that the whole University campus area has been rarely designed, and the gross area further enlarged. Looking at the map in more detail, five constructed buildings within the university campus included road and extra car park zone have been renovated and modernized into four blocks additionally with the bus terminal. The map broadly displays that whilst physics, biology, and chemistry buildings were three departed blocks on the northeast part of the university in the year 1985, that construction has been converted into one total building now. Furthermore, the library zone was enlarged further and as combined with the IT center, came to have its final unit position. It is explicitly observed that the southwest area which was set aside for parking the cars has been replaced to shuttle bus terminal and greenery place. The road which was longitude through university was demolished. The connection between blocks has been supplied with the passageway. Moreover, the circle-shaped lecture theatre, more places for students, and beset buildings with trees have brought in university modernized style. Although, admin the building remains stable, nevertheless, it lost its sphere.
The supplied map compares the development which took place in the Layout of the
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Woodwards
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University
in the period from 1985 till
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now
.

Overall
, it is lucid that
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Woodwards
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University
has undergone radical alteration approximately over 35 years period. It is intriguing to note that the whole
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University
campus area
The adverb 'rarely' is usually put between 'has' and 'been'.
has been rarely
designed, and the gross area
further
enlarged.

Looking at the map in more detail, five constructed
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buildings
within the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
university
campus included road and extra car park zone have
been renovated
and modernized into four blocks
additionally
with the bus terminal. The map
broadly
displays that whilst physics, biology, and chemistry
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
buildings
were three departed blocks on the northeast part of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
university
in the year 1985, that construction has
been converted
into one total
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
building
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
.
Furthermore
, the library zone
was enlarged
further
and as combined with the IT center, came to have its final unit position.

It is
explicitly
observed that the southwest area which
was set
aside for parking the cars has
been replaced
to shuttle bus terminal and greenery place. The road which was longitude through
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
university
was demolished
. The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
connection between
blocks has
been supplied
with the passageway.
Moreover
, the circle-shaped lecture
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theatre
, more places for students, and beset
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buildings
with trees have brought in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
university
modernized style. Although, admin

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the
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building
remains stable,
nevertheless
, it lost its sphere.
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IELTS academic the changes in the layout of the university

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