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The sales of different kind of jam from 2004 to 2012.

The sales of different kind of jam from 2004 to 2012. KlNBw

The line graph illustrates the consumption of five types of jam which are strawberry, raspberry, grape, cherry and plum between 2009 and 2014. Units are measured in dollars. Overall, there was an upward trend in most kinds of jam except for plum. It is also noticeable that the expenditure of strawberry was always on the top purchases. Starting at under 4 million in the first year, then both strawberry and grape increased sharply reaching their highest point at 7 million and about 4. $8 million in 2014, respectively. While, with 3% million units in 2009, the consumption of plum declined rapidly until it reached a trough in 2014 with 0% buyers. Finally, cherry and raspberry jam experienced a fluctuation throughout the period, peaking at 3 trillion units and 5 million units in 2012, respectively. By the end of the year, the sales of cherry noticed under 3 million units comparing to raspberry with about 5. 5 trillion units.

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