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The given chart compares and contrasts data on the changes in the level of robbery per thousand car (TPV) in four country accordimg the chart over a period of 10 years between 1990 to 1999 measured in tousand car

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The given chart compares and contrasts data on the changes in the level of robbery per thousand car (TPV) in four country accordimg the chart over a period of 10 years between 1990 to 1999 measured in tousand car A glance at the picture reveals that despite of sharp climbing in sweden regarding cars stealing over the period as a whole, all other countries experienced a moderate fall in vehicle burglary. It is apperently seen great britain(GB) had the most rate of theft. The robbery rate in 1990 was about 17 TPV since other three country's rate were particularly low. GB experienced a oscillation from 1992 to 1996 while in 1996 it hit a peak by roughly 20 TPV. After that the diagram illustrates this factor started to plunge and in 1999 it notched a record by 16 TPV. On the other side, france and Canada commence at a fairly level of between 7 and 8 TPV in 1990. But while rate in France experienced a significant upsurge to reach 8 TPV over the 1 year, this rate for Canada remained constant. As the figure suggests, there was a mild decline for both country. France reached to 7 and for canada it seems 5 TPV. Unlike france next Canada's rising was avoidable and with a stable remaining it finished process by recording 5 TPV in 1999. But between 1995 and 1999 France experianced a gradual falling. In 1999 france approached to 5 TPV just like Canada The other country, Sweden, starting minimum amount between all countries notwithstanding (5. 5TPV), experienced a sharp uplift to 14 TPV over a period of 10 years
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IELTS academic The given chart compares and contrasts data on the changes in the level of robbery per thousand car (TPV) in four country accordimg the chart over a period of 10 years between 1990 to 1999 measured in tousand car

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