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nowdays, people think getting new stuff catogrise under the need, but others declare tend purchase recentlyt hings they don't need due to these main reasons. in my opnion, buying a lot is more than the thought of needs. First, many celebrities have been influenced others via media by ads that people want to own what they have no matter how it cost regardless of the financial states and its necessisity. such as special type or brand of sneakers or trainers that would go viral. second, a lot of folks obtain recent object becuase of getting recent items that fit the current world that have sight change that unnoticed for exapmple, modern mobiles in sipt of the well-being of the old one that has been published 9 months ago from its arrival. third, individuals buying things for being shopaholic. irregardless of how many they own things they addict to buy for instance collecting specific type of brand with its variety of colors. to sum up, once we could thought money comes and goes, we try to please ourself as much as we could without questioning its valuable urgent essiential needless.
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nowdays
,
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people
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think
getting new stuff
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catogrise
under the need,
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but
others declare tend
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purchase
recentlyt
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hings
they don't need due to these main reasons.
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in
my
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opnion
, buying a lot is more than the
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thought
of needs.

First
,
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many
celebrities have
been influenced
others via media by ads that
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people
want to
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own
what they have no matter how it cost regardless of the financial states and its
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necessisity
.
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such
as special type or brand of sneakers or trainers that would go viral.

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second
,
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a lot of
folks obtain recent object
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becuase
of getting recent items that fit the
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current
world that have sight
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change
that unnoticed for
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exapmple
, modern mobiles in
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sipt
of the well-being of the
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old
one that has
been published
9 months ago from its arrival.

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third
, individuals buying things for being shopaholic.
'Irregardless' is acceptable in casual and nonstandard writing at best. In formal style you should use "regardless".
irregardless
of how
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many
they
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own
things they addict to
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buy
for instance
collecting specific type of brand with its variety of colors.

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to
sum up, once we could
The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: "think"
thought
money
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comes
and goes, we try to
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please
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ourself
as much as we could without questioning its valuable urgent
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essiential
needless.
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189 words
5.5
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