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comparison among three table

comparison among three table NlQa2
That table gives us some infomations on the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets. While depends on each diet, each table has been shown the precentage of use carbohydrates, protein and fat. As we can see in average diet amount of use carbohydrates are approximately 40%, while in healthy diet this amount is 50% and in addition in healthy diet for sport, it is more than others and 60%. Another thing is the precentage of consumption of fat which in average diet and healthy diet are the same way. Both of them are 20%, while this amount in healthy diet for sport is a bit altered and less than others. It is15%. The third case is protein itake. In particular average diet, it is 40%, however in healthy diet it is 30% and on the other hand in healthy diet for sport it is 25%.
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infomations
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diets. While depends on each diet, each table has
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carbohydrates, protein and
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in average diet amount of
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carbohydrates are approximately 40%, while in
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diet this amount is 50% and
in addition
in
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diet for sport, it is more than others and 60%. Another thing is the
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precentage
of consumption of
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which in average diet and
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diet are the same way. Both of them are 20%, while this amount in
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diet for sport is a bit altered and less than others. It is15%.

The third case is protein
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itake
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diet it is 30% and
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diet for sport it is 25%.
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IELTS academic comparison among three table

Academic
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3 paragraphs
149 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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