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The change in club from 1990 to now.

The change in club from 1990 to now. GLQlx
The two maps show the development of well-known sport club from 1990 to today. Overall, it can be seen easily that the cafe and reception area remained same from 1990 to till. To begin with, in 1990 the club providing outdoor pool facility but today it is completely changed into indoor pool. From the eastern side of the club the park area was completely turned into new basketball court for club members as well as on opposite side of 8 club build new tennis court in a place of car parking area. The old tennis court building replaced by the new fitness centre and the changing room facility also build very close to it. Now club have enough space for thire members and more facilities.
The two maps
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the development of well-known sport
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club
from 1990 to
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today
.

Overall
, it can be
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seen
easily
that the
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cafe
and reception area remained same from 1990 to till.

To
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begin
with, in 1990 the
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club
providing outdoor pool facility
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but
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today
it is completely
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changed
into indoor pool. From the eastern side of the
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club
the park area was completely turned into new basketball court for
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club
members
as well
as on opposite side of 8
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club
build new tennis court in a place of car parking area. The
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old
tennis court building replaced by the new fitness
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centre
and the changing room facility
also
build
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very
close to it.
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Now
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club
have
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enough
space
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for thire
members and more facilities.
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IELTS academic The change in club from 1990 to now.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
125 words
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