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the recycled materials in the year 1982 to 2010

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The above line graph illustrates the recycled materials namely, paper and carboard, glass containers, aluminuimin cans and plastics in a specific country in the year 1982 to 2010. Overall it is evident from the graph that paper and carboard have been recycled the most in the year 1990 about 80%. Aluminium is seen to have a gradual increase in the recycling rate up to 50%. Glass containers are seen to have a dip in the year 1986 and then seen to have an increase. In conclusion, plastics had the least recycling rate in the year 1986-2006 and paper and cardboard were recycled more as compared to the other three components.
The above line graph illustrates the recycled materials
namely
, paper and
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carboard
, glass containers,
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aluminuimin
cans and plastics in a specific country in the
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year
1982 to 2010.

Overall
it is evident from the graph that paper and
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carboard
have
been recycled
the most in the
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year
1990 about 80%.

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Aluminium
is
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seen
to have a gradual increase in the recycling rate up to 50%. Glass containers are
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seen
to have a dip in the
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year
1986 and then
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seen
to have an increase.

In conclusion
, plastics had the least recycling rate in the
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year
1986-2006 and paper and cardboard
were recycled
more
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as
compared to the other three components.
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IELTS academic the recycled materials in the year 1982 to 2010

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
110 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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