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The provided graph illustrates the production of oil capacity per day in six countries,measured in millions of barrels

The provided graph illustrates the production of oil capacity per day in six countries, measured in millions of barrels AjKYL
The provided graph illustrates the production of oil capacity per day in six countries, measured in millions of barrels. As an overall trend, it can be seen that the oil generated in provided countries increased in the given period of time. However, the oil production in Qatar is nearly the same as at the beginning of 20 years period. In 1990, the oil capacity generated in Qatar is just below 1 million per day, and there was an upward trend to 1 million per day in 2000 where it slumps again to about 0. 5 million per day at the final end of the period. On the other hand, Saudi Arabia produced over 8 million barrel per day in 1990, and it sharply shot up to over 14 million per day throughout the given years. Although oil production capacity in Iran starts at 3 million per day, it rose up to nearly 4 million in 2000 and ended up in over 4 million per day in 2010. Iraq, Kuwait and UAE generated oil at around 2 million at the beginning of the given time, and their production has an improvement of nearly 2 million and ended in around 4 million barrel per day by the year 2010
The provided graph illustrates the
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capacity per day in six countries, measured in
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of barrels. As an
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trend, it can be
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seen
that the
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oil
generated in provided countries increased in the
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period of time.
However
, the
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production
in Qatar is
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In 1990, the
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capacity generated in Qatar is
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below 1
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million
per day, and there was an upward trend to 1
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per day in 2000 where it slumps again to about 0. 5
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million
per day at the final
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end
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On the other hand
, Saudi Arabia produced over 8
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million
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barrel
per day in 1990, and it
sharply
shot up to over 14
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million
per day throughout the
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years.

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capacity in Iran
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per day, it rose up to
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in 2000 and ended up in over 4
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per day in 2010. Iraq, Kuwait and UAE generated
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at around 2
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at the beginning of the
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time, and their
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has an improvement of
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and ended in around 4
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barrel
per day by the year 2010
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IELTS academic The provided graph illustrates the production of oil capacity per day in six countries, measured in millions of barrels

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