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The chart show the transporatation method on regular basis.

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The provided bar charts illustrate the use of the transportation on the regular basis. Units are measured in the percentages. Overall, it is clearly seen that, the maximum transportation used for the work is a bicycle. In contrast, The shared private car is the least utilized transportation for the leisure. Look at the graph in details, The transportation of shared private car used for the leisure is a below 5 percent compared to above 5 percent of the work. However, For bus and car from employer, they are used almost an equally around 11 percent and 13, respectively. Analyzing other categories of transportation, there is no change for the used of the own private car transportation for the work and leisure, it is an approximately 22 percent. Although, the subway transportation used 32 percent by the work purpose, but 30 percent used by the leisure purpose. Nevertheless, For bicycle, it is widely used for the leisure purpose, which is 40 percent, 35 percent of the used for the work regarding.
The provided bar charts illustrate the
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transportation
on the regular basis. Units
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in the percentages.

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, it is
clearly
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seen
that, the maximum
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transportation
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used
for the
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work
is a bicycle.
In contrast
, The shared private
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car
is the least utilized
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transportation
for the leisure.

Look at the graph in
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, The
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transportation
of shared private
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used
for the
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leisure
is a below 5
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percent
compared to above 5
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percent
of the
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work
.
However
, For bus and
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from employer, they are
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almost an
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around 11
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and 13,
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.

Analyzing other categories of
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transportation
, there is no
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for the
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private
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for the
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and
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, it is an approximately 22
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. Although, the subway
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32
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purpose,
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30
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Nevertheless
, For bicycle, it is
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, 35
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